Parallelism
Whenever possible, in writing an outline, coordinate heads should
be expressed in parallel form. That is, nouns should be made parallel with
nouns, verb forms with verb forms, adjectives with adjectives, and so on.
(Example: Nouns - computers, programs, users; Verbs - to compute, to program,
to use; Adjectives - home computers, new programs, experienced users.)
Although parallel structure is desired, logical and clear writing should
not be sacrificed simply to maintain parallelism (For example, there are
times when nouns and gerunds used at the same level of an outline are acceptable.)
Reasonableness and flexibility of form is preferred to rigidity.
Coordination
In outlining, those items which are of equal significance have comparable
numeral or letter designations; an A is equal a B, a 1 to a 2, an a to
a b, etc. Coordinates should be seen as "having the same value." Coordination
is a principle that enables the writer to maintain a coherent and consistent
document.
Correct coordination
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A. Word processing programs
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B. Data base programs
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C. Spreadsheet programs
Incorrect coordination
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A. Word processing programs
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B. Wordstar
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C. Thinktank
Explanation: Wordstar is a type of word processing program and should
be treated as a subdivision. Thinktank is a type of organizational
program. One way to correct coordination would be:
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A. Types of programs
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1. Wordstar
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2. Thinktank
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B. Evaluation of programs
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1. Wordstar
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2. Thinktank
Subordination
In order to indicate relevance, that is levels of significance, an outline
uses major and minor heading. Thus in ordering ideas you should organize
material from general to specific or from abstract to concrete - the more
general or abstract the concept, the higher the level or rank in the outline.
This principle allows your material to be ordered in terms of logic and
requires a clear articulation of the relationship between component parts
used in the outline. Subdivisions of a major division should always have
the same relationship to the whole.
Correct subordination
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A. Word processing programs
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1. Applewriter
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2. Wordstar
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B. Thought processors
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1. Thinktank
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2. THOR
Faulty subordination
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A. Word processing programs
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1. Applewriter
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2. Useful
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3. Obsolete
Explanation: There is an A without a B. Also 1, 2, 3 are not equal; Applewriter
is a type of word processing program, and useful and obsolete are qualities.
One way to correct this faulty subordination is:
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A. Applewriter
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1. Positive features
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2. Negative features
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B. Wordstar
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1. Positive features
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2. Negative features
Division
To divide you always need at least two parts; therefore, there can
never be an A without a B, a 1 without a 2, an a without a b, etc. Usually
there is more than one way to divide parts; however, when dividing use
only one basis of division at each rank and make the basis of division
as sharp as possible.
Example 1:
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A. Microcomputers hardware
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1. Types
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2. Cost
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3. Maintenance
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B. Microcomputers software
Example 2
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A. Computers
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1. Mainframe
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2. Micro
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a. Floppy Disk
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b. Hard disk
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B. Computer Uses
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1. Institutional
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2. Personal
FORM
The most important rule for outlining form is to be consistent!!
An outline can use TOPIC OR SENTENCE STRUCTURE.
A TOPIC outline uses words or phrases for all entries; uses no
punctuation after entries
Advantages - presents a brief overview of work; is generally
easier and faster to write than a sentence outline
A SENTENCE outline uses complete sentences for all entries; uses
correct punctuation
Advantages - presents a more detailed overview of work including
possible topic sentences; is easier and faster for writing the final paper.
An outline can use Roman Numerals/Letters or Decimal form.